The Fallen Angel:MrGoko (Episode 1) by mrgoko, journal
The Fallen Angel:MrGoko (Episode 1)
It start with the blue sky,something fall from the sky....it was bright,
it hit the earth,but no one saw it.
The fallen angel knock down unconciuos,he wakes up,his memory a little bit fade,
he woke up in a forrest,he start dragging him self trying to go somewhere,but he didn't know
where to go,a fragment of his memory started to appear,a voices say "You are condemned to rot in earth
for your traitorous act!",it started to fade again.
He dragged him self,his left wing broke because of the fall,he heard a voice in
the forrest,he dragged him self in that direction,then he heard a fight,he feel an evil presence
near the place.What he saw
Hey guys .. i'm starting my own manga but i find some difficulties expressing the ideas in my head while i start writing it down .. i have like tons of ideas and i can even imagine the scenes but i couldn't start writing down the text i always get stuck . if anyone here can advise me please .. thank you
well. start developing your characters. have the story based on them rather than an initial deus ex machina. deus ex machina is only good when making a low fantasy or horror series. but for your slice of life's, your casuals. have the story rotate around your character.